The part where your voices change is where background singers come in a little bit right.. It sounds wierd right now.
The part where you say 'I'm frightened too' sounds wierd.. the accent i mean. I'm guessing all that will be left to background singers too, right? Wouldn't hurt if you we're sharper/more abrupt on the ends of the words sometimes.
Actually, if you haven't heard anything of mine, I'd start with "Caliban's Charms," not "Let Me In." I edited my initial post to that effect, just now.
I do very much appreciate the feedback! Thanks again, everyone!
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