a poem I wrote during a realy rough spot in my life

[brianmanahan]

just a pome i during some real difficult personel times i wrote
that time is over now but i think it might help some one? tell me what you think of it thanks enjoy



like a flower in a crack in the sidewark
do i cower in the dark
corner of my room

and like a lark on a lagoon in a park
i disembark
on a loneley juorney of life

and like an eelecrtrical spark
i arc
back and forth between pain & sorroow

and like a sand shark
i sit and lurk without remark
theres nothing left 2 say

-and like a treasure ship without a letter of marque
im an easy mark, for the pirates i call my friends
my life is one big question mark

-andlike tony stark
i just sit in a cave with a box of scraps trying to fix my broken heart

and like a charm quark
no body undrestands me

so i stand here and i
and i cover my heart in bark

edit: changed "pome" to "poem" in the thread title, because it was annoying me in the way that someone scraping their fingers over a chalkboard would be annoying. -DrPizza

Necro'ing your own thread for further attention whore reasons is a new low.

Perknose
Forum Director

 

[rcpratt]

ark ark ark

 

[brianmanahan]

? no it is arc i think

 

[deadlyapp]

why does it all rhyme in ark rofl

 

[Soundmanred]

no body undrestands me

That is what I call an understatement.
Sidewark?

 

[AstroManLuca]

 

[DangerAardvark]

Great. Now whatever was inside of you is inside of me. I hope you're happy.

 

[brianmanahan]

why does it all rhyme in ark rofl

i was aspireing for a lyrical quality

 

[RavenSEAL]

wtf is a pome? You mean a puma?

 

[mb]

just a poem i during some real difficult personel times i wrote
that time is over now but i think it might help some one? tell me what you think of it thanks enjoy



like a flower in a crack in the sidewark
do i cower in the dark
corner of my room

and like a lark on a lagoon in a park
i disembark
on a loneley juorney of life

and like an eelecrtrical spark
i arc
back and forth between pain & sorroow

and like a sand shark
i sit and lurk without remark
theres nothing left 2 say

-and like a treasure ship without a letter of marque
im an easy mark, for the pirates i call my friends
my life is one big question mark

-andlike tony stark
i just sit in a cave with a box of scraps trying to fix my broken heart

and like a charm quark
no body undrestands me

so i stand here and i
and i cover my heart in bark

quoted in case OP regrets posting this

 

[brianmanahan]

quoted in case OP regrets posting this

regrets? this is parhaps my best work ever, it is deep down to the well of my soull

 

[Soundmanred]

regrets? this is parhaps my best work ever, it is deep down to the well of my soull

Wow. Just wow.

 

[brianmanahan]

Wow. Just wow.

thank you!

 

[RavenSEAL]

regrets? this is parhaps my best work ever, it is deep down to the well of my soull

Yas, paryaps mtil u lern 2 spel

 

[HardcoreRobot]

you should edit your title, then at least people wont want to insult you before even reading the OP

 

[Ns1]

this has to be a troll post

 

[KeithTalent]

You posted this on IGN as well, or is that someone else?

KT

 

[Ns1]

ROFL

this guy is like Casiotech

Poem on VNB:
http://vnboards.ign.com/acf/b5258/113966076/p1/

Poll on VNB:
http://vnboards.ign.com/Boards/Message.aspx?brd=5152&topic=112787957&start=112789605

"Date Posted: 3/23 1:55pm Subject: do you always skip past Iampk's threads/posts?"

rofl

 

[xSauronx]

a pome?

 

[DingDingDao]

I got to sidewark and had to quit reading.

 

[Cerpin Taxt]

http://www.fileden.com/files/2006/8/15/168705//poem.mp3

EDIT: Fixed link for lulz.

 

[lxskllr]

a pome?

 

[BoomerD]

regrets? this is parhaps my best work ever, it is deep down to the well of my soull

"Parhaps" you should take some English classes instead of Engrish classes to improve your writing "abillity."

I certainly hope your "pome" isn't a tome...


http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pome

"In botany, a pome (after the Latin word for fruit: pōmum) is a type of fruit produced by flowering plants in the subfamily Maloideae of the family Rosaceae."

I see lxskllr has it covered...

 

[Soundmanred]

thank you!

It was not a compliment.
Poems are meant to be a form of personal expression, but when you present them to others, proper spelling goes a long way.
Nobody will take you seriously with the mess you've made of the English language.

 

[Paladin3]

I read your "pome" to my cat, not the happy, playful one, but the petulant little morose fucker that won't let me pet him, and even he rolled his eyes.