a poem I wrote during a realy rough spot in my life

[ThatsABigOne]

Go back to rapping.

 

[BudAshes]

FTFY to reflect the OP's spelling and intellect.:whiste:

Alone in the nite,
I sit down and rite,
An epic pome of soro and pane,
It's about a fite
between 2 knites,
that continu to batle in vain.
One's pomes are just rite,
and he's flying high like a kite
The other used to operate a krain
boomerd's hate is tite,
with no end in sight,
but manahanan can feel no pain
for he's not very bright
but he takes his mite
from the many roks in his brane.

 

[Nebbers]

cool pome bro

 

[brianmanahan]

@trident this is an example of a pome that i wrote to deal with sad time, i suggest you do something similar, it will be carthotic to say the least

 

[Mr. Pedantic]

@trident this is an example of a pome that i wrote to deal with sad time, i suggest you do something similar, it will be carthotic to say the least

It wasn't cathartic for us. Is it really worth saving your own life if you cause the suicides of so many others?

 

[brianmanahan]

It wasn't cathartic for us. Is it really worth saving your own life if you cause the suicides of so many others?

please dont joke about such things

 

[BoomerD]

Dude...are you trying to get him to commit suicide? Your attempts at poemetry are pathetic at best...and are bad enough that people want to kill themselves for wasting the time reading at them. (you can't actually read them because they're so poorly written)

 

[Mr. Pedantic]

please dont joke about such things

I was being completely serious. It's a hypothetical situation.

 

[Soundmanred]

Why would you try to get people to commit suicide? That's messed up,man.
I thought you were just trolling with the fake bad spelling/poetry, but this is too much sir.
Please stop helping people to kill themselves.

 

[schneiderguy]

 

[Joseph F]

I thought that this thread was locked.

 

[Inspector Jihad]

i enjoy your pomes brianmanahan. don't listen to the haters.

 

[brianmanahan]

i enjoy your pomes brianmanahan. don't listen to the haters.

thank you, i never do, if i did then id be trident

 

[SandEagle]

i enjoy your pomes brianmanahan. don't listen to the haters.

me too. you're pomes should be mandatory readings in every school. it will make kids work harder.

 

[brianmanahan]

me too. you're pomes should be mandatory readings in every school. it will make kids work harder.

sandeagle i miss you

i hope that wherever you are and whatever alt you are using will see this and smile

 

[borisvodofsky]

this sucks.

 

[dud]

sandeagle i miss you

i hope that wherever you are and whatever alt you are using will see this and smile

Dude, why did you resurrect a dead thread ... and what ever happened to SE?

 

[Ichinisan]

Dude, why did you resurrect a dead thread ... and what ever happened to SE?

Why not? This thread is awesome. :awe:

 

[T_Yamamoto]

Dude, why did you resurrect a dead thread ... and what ever happened to SE?

Sand eagle had to get a new identity since he's wanted for terrorism.

Actually he has retired from these forums.

 

[brianmanahan]

edit: changed "pome" to "poem" in the thread title, because it was annoying me in the way that someone scraping their fingers over a chalkboard would be annoying. -DrPizza

this is like defacing the loouve imho

 

[brianmanahan]

Sand eagle had to get a new identity since he's wanted for terrorism.

Actually he has retired from these forums.

actually, hes back!

 

[SandEagle]

actually, hes back!

using my good name to.shamelessly bump this thread? pathetic.
i just read the pome again now and it seems to get better ever time. wait, maybe i just getting dumber? fffffffuuuu

 

[brianmanahan]

it seems to get better ever time

wait, maybe i just getting dumber?

both of these evaluate to true