Almost there ......my web page !!! Need comments ......all sorts & some constructive too !!!

lawaris

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O.K. guys .......thanks for all the help I have got so far ...... if I had not been criticized here .....I could not have improved it

Don't tell me about the music......and please take into consideration that it is a " personal page".

LMK what you think....

hhhhhmmmm.....esp. " Ameesh ".

MY WEB
 

lawaris

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link up guys.........thks. notfred

Ladies Man - that was b'for but my g/f sort of " damaged it "
 

gopunk

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separate your little words of wisdom from your blocks of information.

move your links to different categories to the top, some place where it is easier to access.

don't center the stuff about india. centering informational text is bad.

i think the stuff you have on your main page should be put on their own separate pages, and linked to. right now it seems like a hodgepodge of misc information.
 

notfred

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too many colors, too black of a background, too many animated gifs, and too much noise. <- My Opinion.
 

lawaris

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thks. gopunk.......noted and thks.

will see to it tonight.

BTW : This is why I posted this topic .....those of you who had the misfortune to look at the page when I first got it up would notice the diff.
 

dfi

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Too many colors. A black background works sometimes, but in this case, it doesnt. The problem is the text. Too many colors.

Music has to go. I know you dont want to hear it, but it's so important that I feel I must. I wont visit a page w/ music twice. It's just so annoying when you're playing music, and this background noise comes on.

Animated gifs are ok in small doses, and preferably not next to each other. You dont have to be a photoshop wizard to have a good looking site. Simple color partitions do nicely to separate content.

The site navigation should be near the top or on the side, instead of on the bottom of the page. Navigation should be immediately spotted and intuitive to use.

I really dont see a particular reason to make a distinction between a personal webpage and a professional, commercial webpage. The webpage is a reflection of you, and simply writing off the page as a "personal webpage" seems like a poor excuse.

For example, look at the anandtech frontpage. The basic design is not filled with colors. Simple tan boxes on a white background, clearly partitioning the site into easily recognized sections. The navigation is up at the top and immediately accessible.

My two cents.

dfi
 

bjb86s

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<< too many colors, too black of a background, too many animated gifs, and too much noise. <- My Opinion. >>



Ugh... what he said. The music is extremely annoying. No continous theme. The gifs are cheesy (animated backgrounds?!?)
 

AdamDuritz99

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hmm, i think you need to add a little color, a few more animated .gifs would be nice. And Hmm, could you try to add different sounds on different pages?



ok, sorry for being an @ss. i'm just goofing around. For serious recommendation, do the opposite of everything i said.

peace
sean
 

lawaris

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hhhhmmmmmm................

1. remove some gifs
2. remove background music ( can put on a western classical or sitar ...... but totally remove it ......gotta think about this )
3. make less colorful


any more ???
 

gopunk

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2. remove background music ( can put on a western classical or sitar ...... but totally remove it ......gotta think about this )

one option is to have something where users can turn the music on if they so choose, but that it is set to be off by default.


any more ???

i think several people have noted that there needs to be more structure as far as how the information is presented.
 

lawaris

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yeah can do that with the music.......any suggestions how to do it ??

have seen some sites where u can do so .....but dunno how it works


Structuring .....I forgot that......I guess U mean removing extraneous info.
 
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