Come critique my website

[Unheard]

How much space is 5,00mb?

 

[xanis]

Originally posted by: ViviTheMage
I'll post a new thread once I get a new design going!

Anyone that can offer me some free, or cheap PS stuff let me know I may need some things done...

YGPM

 

[ViviTheMage]

Originally posted by: Goosemaster
kind of a template, eh?

http://www.sharepointfba.com/




edit:

-Also, it looks exactly liek aparked domain
-on your info page I have to scroll down the entire screen 3 TIMES on a decent-sized LCD monitor to check out the features - try using javascript to condense the feature sets into an exapndable menu etc if you really want to put all of that in there.

it is . I am sure it's around a few other places too. Solucija does some good work. I went to read the lic. and it says you can't use for commercial purposes...I will probably pay them to make me something.

Originally posted by: Unheard
How much space is 5,00mb?

If you don't know, you'll never know ^_^.

Originally posted by: rasczak
although it made me laugh, take out teh testimonials until you've actually had real customer feed back imo.

Under our goal to you: Sacraficing is actually sacrificing


also under custom packages on the right hand side, suffecient is actually spelled sufficient.

needs a bit more pow! but overall not bad.

Good luck man.

actually, the testimonial is real, but like I said I just threw a bunch of stuff up to get some content.

 

[ConwayJim]

i actually like the site, very clean and to the point. The colour scheme is not my favorite, but it still looks sleek

 

[Hacp]

Your top area should act like tabs. Instead, its very messy with the words telling you where you are.

 

[Kelemvor]

Doesn't even come up for me.

Index of /

* billing/
* cgi-bin/

Apache/2.2.11 (Unix) mod_ssl/2.2.11 OpenSSL/0.9.8b mod_auth_passthrough/2.1 mod_bwlimited/1.4 FrontPage/5.0.2.2635 Server at www.vivicalhosting.com Port 80

 

[2Xtreme21]

Originally posted by: Kelemvor
Doesn't even come up for me.

Index of /

* billing/
* cgi-bin/

Apache/2.2.11 (Unix) mod_ssl/2.2.11 OpenSSL/0.9.8b mod_auth_passthrough/2.1 mod_bwlimited/1.4 FrontPage/5.0.2.2635 Server at www.vivicalhosting.com Port 80

Same.

 

[Goosemaster]

Originally posted by: 2Xtreme21

Originally posted by: Kelemvor
Doesn't even come up for me.

Index of /

* billing/
* cgi-bin/

Apache/2.2.11 (Unix) mod_ssl/2.2.11 OpenSSL/0.9.8b mod_auth_passthrough/2.1 mod_bwlimited/1.4 FrontPage/5.0.2.2635 Server at www.vivicalhosting.com Port 80

Same.

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[ViviTheMage]

Originally posted by: Kelemvor
Doesn't even come up for me.

Index of /

* billing/
* cgi-bin/

Apache/2.2.11 (Unix) mod_ssl/2.2.11 OpenSSL/0.9.8b mod_auth_passthrough/2.1 mod_bwlimited/1.4 FrontPage/5.0.2.2635 Server at www.vivicalhosting.com Port 80

i removed it at one point...check now, I spent all weekend on the new layout....let me know what you all think .

 

[SunnyD]

Looks like every other web host out there. I guess that's a good thing.

 

[Descartes]

The problem with templates is that it's always very obviously a template. That doesn't generally instill confidence, but other than that it's a decent layout.

Good luck and have fun...

 

[Descartes]

Double post somehow. I can't remember the last time that's happened...

 

[ViviTheMage]

I can't spend 1000-2000 on a custom website just yet .

If anyone wants to make me a sweet free one, then let me know .

 

[Mr Pickles]

The asian at the bottom, she is blurry...

 

[ViviTheMage]

Originally posted by: Mr Pickles
The asian at the bottom, she is blurry...

That is how she came to me, I swear!

 

[rasczak]

just glossed over it again. 100 times better imo.

 

[polarmystery]

what is 99.9% uptimel?


Under special of the month

 

[ViviTheMage]

Originally posted by: rasczak
just glossed over it again. 100 times better imo.

good, good thanks !

Originally posted by: polarmystery
what is 99.9% uptimel?


Under special of the month

yes, there will be typos...I will fix them.

 

[ViviTheMage]

after lunch crowds

 

[drum]

Top banner needs a more attractive female.

 

[ivan2]

take the pricing section out and use it on your new website, throw the rest away. The chick who took up 30% of the screen serves no purpose except to divert focus to useless information, for your new design, place pricing there instead.

 

[ViviTheMage]

Originally posted by: ivan2
take the pricing section out and use it on your new website, throw the rest away. The chick who took up 30% of the screen serves no purpose except to divert focus to useless information, for your new design, place pricing there instead.

I figured it gave it less of a site holder feel...if I remove it, it'll be relatively plain again :/. Plus, it's just the home page that she is on.

 

[Q]

Need more cleavage.

No but really a thousand times better than the old one

 

[ViviTheMage]

Originally posted by: Quintox
Need more cleavage.

No but really a thousand times better than the old one

Thanks, glad it's an improvement. Now to tweak the hell out of it and cut down on code.

 

[waffleironhead]

Image at the bottom(female) is too washed out. Need a higher res pic.

Looks like someone else pointed it out.*