Come critique my website

[ViviTheMage]

Oh, but racks? that can only be two things..boobs, or servers.

Xanis on here has offered to create me a neato design, what do you guys think of this one??

http://brianalexandrowicz.com/.../vivicalhostlayout.png

 

[Goosemaster]

Originally posted by: ViviTheMage
Oh, but racks? that can only be two things..boobs, or servers.

Xanis on here has offered to create me a neato design, what do you guys think of this one??

http://brianalexandrowicz.com/.../vivicalhostlayout.png

Very nice but I would add a picture banner or something at the top.

 

[ViviTheMage]

Originally posted by: Goosemaster

Originally posted by: ViviTheMage
Oh, but racks? that can only be two things..boobs, or servers.

Xanis on here has offered to create me a neato design, what do you guys think of this one??

http://brianalexandrowicz.com/.../vivicalhostlayout.png

Very nice but I would add a picture banner or something at the top.

yup, I like his design, he is going to add a bit to it and I will probably end up using his! This way he can get a bit of publicity by having his name on the bottom right as well....and it looks pretty slick I think.

 

[James Bond]

Originally posted by: ViviTheMage

Originally posted by: Goosemaster

Originally posted by: ViviTheMage
Oh, but racks? that can only be two things..boobs, or servers.

Xanis on here has offered to create me a neato design, what do you guys think of this one??

http://brianalexandrowicz.com/.../vivicalhostlayout.png

Very nice but I would add a picture banner or something at the top.

yup, I like his design, he is going to add a bit to it and I will probably end up using his! This way he can get a bit of publicity by having his name on the bottom right as well....and it looks pretty slick I think.

Love the logo he made.

 

[ViviTheMage]

me too! I think it may be good enough as he has it, but I asked to see if he could add a little color to it, maybe a banner of some sort...otherwise yeah, I like what he has too!

 

[Crono]

I think your site looks much better now. If you just changed header background to gradient, I think it would be good just as it is.
I like Xanis' logo, though. If you took that and used it in place of your own, I think it would be perfect. Xanis' layout is entirely simple and clean, but I actually prefer your new and improved current layout (perhaps it is the color scheme).

Good work so far

 

[BabaBooey]

Needs more breasts.

 

[ViviTheMage]

Originally posted by: bababooey
Needs more breasts.

working on it!

Originally posted by: Crono
I think your site looks much better now. If you just changed header background to gradient, I think it would be good just as it is.
I like Xanis' logo, though. If you took that and used it in place of your own, I think it would be perfect. Xanis' layout is entirely simple and clean, but I actually prefer your new and improved current layout (perhaps it is the color scheme).

Good work so far

so the new one in the 'test' folder? just toss in Xanis's logo?

What do you think I should gradient for the header?

BTW : Anyone need some web hosting? hehehe.

 

[Mr Pickles]

The asian is still blurry!

 

[ViviTheMage]

Originally posted by: Mr Pickles
The asian is still blurry!

she is removed...

http://www.vivicalhosting.com/test/

 

[Tobolo]

Looking a lot better. The Asian lady at the bottom looks out of focus thought.

Also, whos the chick at the top??

 

[sourceninja]

http://validator.w3.org/check?...doctype=Inline&group=0

 

[Crono]

Originally posted by: ViviTheMage

so the new one in the 'test' folder? just toss in Xanis's logo?

What do you think I should gradient for the header?

BTW : Anyone need some web hosting? hehehe.

Yep, the new one in the folder. Use Xanis' logo (transparent bg/same bg as header). I think a gradient of dark blue, the same you used for the "View Plans" and "Order Now" buttons, to the light blue you have now, would work well.

One small thing: I would put "Register a Domain Name!" or something similar above "Search Domain Name" and put "search for a domain name" as smaller subtext to make it a little clearer what the search field is for. Most people could figure it out anyway, but it might help to make it more clear for those few who wouldn't.

Originally posted by: sourceninja
http://validator.w3.org/check?...doctype=Inline&group=0

I'm guessing he used a template for the website intitially, and then made edits to it. I think its much better to code everything from scratch from the beginning to avoid non-compliant code, but he could still fix it later on after all the edits.

 

[ViviTheMage]

Gotcha, thanks guys .

I'll tweak the code later, just wanted to get everything looking usable...wonder if I should just move over to xanis's version though, I like the cleanliness of it.