Composition- I'd like your thoughts?

[Naer]

Double edit: new improv in Bm(minor)

https://youtu.be/oW8p5N8CDk4

Edit: Tifa theme on piano

old video

 

[Zanovar]

erm

 

[Zanovar]

nvm

 

[Zanovar]

nvm

 

[lxskllr]

I think there might be some music in there somewhere. Between the notes I believe.


Nice Beiber pants :^D

 

[Mayne]

Are you self-taught? Keep working at it my man. There were some off-key moments but overall, not bad.

 

[nakedfrog]

I think have the same USB hub.

 

[BurnItDwn]

Melody and Rythm are there, sounds like an honest attempt at some sort of ClassicalJazz Fusion.

This sounds like music!

 

[BurnItDwn]

ok, you obviously know how to play the instrument .....

 

[Red Squirrel]

I'd make some kind of joke or witty comment... but it's probably better than what I could play. lol.

 

[Zanovar]

Thats pretty good actually.rough in some parts,im sure you will work on it.

 

[GibbyPruchesi]

Pretty alright, but some parts seem way off, kinda ruin it for me. Not sure if it's lack of practice or just mistakes or something. Some improvements could be made for sure

 

[SKORPI0]

1. Needs more work.
2. The flow and rhythm is just not there.
3. Your fingers are too heavy on the keys.

 

[brianmanahan]

you can't just play random notes. piano doesn't work like that.

 

[Naer]

thanks for the nice comments all

I did another one to show that I improved slightly. I am healing from chest injury. Hopefully vid is better. Tifa theme video

 

[paperfist]

The first half sounded pretty awesome to me.

If you're taking requests I'd like to hear some Axel-F please.