Constructive Criticism for My Website

SandEagle

Lifer
Aug 4, 2007
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2 things:

1) you need a comments section for each article. i need to let you know how bad your advice is

2) smartmoneyhelp? smart money doesnt need help. dumbmoneyhelp is.more suitable


your welcome
 

Net

Golden Member
Aug 30, 2003
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2 things:

1) you need a comments section for each article. i need to let you know how bad your advice is

2) smartmoneyhelp? smart money doesnt need help. dumbmoneyhelp is.more suitable


your welcome

thanks for the input.

there is a comments section so have at it
 

SandEagle

Lifer
Aug 4, 2007
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thanks for the input.

there is a comments section so have at it


well i'll be........helps to check the site before commenting. i can send you great financial advice that you can post. good site though, congrats
 

Fritzo

Lifer
Jan 3, 2001
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Looks like a standard blog page. Nice and clean. No complaints...other than it needs a MIDI file playing in the background when you visit.

Maybe a FLAMING LOGO too!

 

Titan

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Oct 15, 1999
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Looks very Web 2.0 but that's ok I guess. You didn't screw anything up along those lines, I just personally find 2.0 style to be very forgettable. But it does look fine, colors work, etc.

With the current relatively short post, I see 2 ads above the fold. I would prefer to see only one, and a second if I have to scroll down.
 

D1gger

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Oct 3, 2004
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I prefer sites that you don't have to scroll as much. They have the headline and then the first paragraph or two of the article with a click to expand or go the entire article. This makes it easier to scan the articles and read the items that are the most interesting.
 

Saint Nick

Lifer
Jan 21, 2005
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I'd say it doesn't look credible. Especially with that name. What is your target audience? What is your product? I'd say look into developing those a lot more, then focus on making the website look more personable.
 

Krazy4Real

Lifer
Oct 3, 2003
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Looks very Web 2.0 but that's ok I guess. You didn't screw anything up along those lines, I just personally find 2.0 style to be very forgettable. But it does look fine, colors work, etc.

With the current relatively short post, I see 2 ads above the fold. I would prefer to see only one, and a second if I have to scroll down.
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I prefer sites that you don't have to scroll as much. They have the headline and then the first paragraph or two of the article with a click to expand or go the entire article. This makes it easier to scan the articles and read the items that are the most interesting.
and this
 

gothamhunter

Diamond Member
Apr 20, 2010
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You're endorsing Norton, im some way, shape, or form. In that sense, I will never trust your advice.
 

dwell

pics?
Oct 9, 1999
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Looks like a blog. Some weird clipping going on with the logo on Chromium/Mac.

 

Mike Gayner

Diamond Member
Jan 5, 2007
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The second word of the first post is a type-o, so yeah you have no credibility already.

edit:
LOL then this gem:
"Some businesses lower their prices (or conversely higher their prices) if the website viewer is coming from a business."

Guy, really, if you such a weak grasp of the English language, perhaps blogging isn't for you.
 

Fritzo

Lifer
Jan 3, 2001
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The second word of the first post is a type-o, so yeah you have no credibility already.

edit:
LOL then this gem:
"Some businesses lower their prices (or conversely higher their prices) if the website viewer is coming from a business."

Guy, really, if you such a weak grasp of the English language, perhaps blogging isn't for you.

What? Some businesses to more higher their prices, but after they see the compostition, they more lower their prices. Simple business practse.
 

DominionSeraph

Diamond Member
Jul 22, 2009
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What? Some businesses to more higher their prices, but after they see the compostition, they more lower their prices. Simple business practse.

I'm about to more higher my hand and then rapidly more lower it across your face.
 

uhohs

Diamond Member
Oct 29, 2005
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needs frames, background midi, animated gifs, and under-construction graphics.
 

artvscommerce

Golden Member
Jul 27, 2010
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Unfortunately I don't have anything constructive to add, but I just wanted to say nice work! I enjoyed reading some of your posts and I will be saving this link to read more when I have time.
 

pyonir

Lifer
Dec 18, 2001
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Do you have permission to use the photos in your articles? Royalty free stock photos? Did you get permission to use ebay, craigslist, norton and mint logos?

Something else to think about.
 
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