How about some critiquing rather than bashing or rating?
It doesn't look bad, your saturation was pointed out earlier. I can't really understand why you decided to mess with the contract\saturation in the first place. Can you explain what it was needed? Maybe I'm not seeing something. The good thing is that it doesn't matter. People aren't supposed to see the original image and as long as they don't see it they won't know the difference.
Your biggest issue right now is your shadow. Nothing on this page indicated that your light source is coming from 7 o'clock except the one shadow on you. Nothing else actually has a shadow at all. If you want to keep that shadow that way you are going to have to bled it into the cement and grass more, a lot more. The lines should be much less rigid, more static around the edges, round it off a bit. Its the middle of the day which means light is bouncing off of everything and since its cloudy there isn't a light source strong enough to give you a shadow like that.
Nice work removing the girl. I wouldn't be able to tell she existed in the original.
As for the topic, she dumped you eh?