Critique my Resume...

[crisp82]

I have reached that point in my job where it is time to move on and progress. I have not yet put my current position on there, as I wanted to see where I am going wrong and redo completely.

I am aiming at Desktop Support, with a view to technical progression.

I appreciate you taking your time to read through it and post your comments.

Please don't be shy. I need this to shine as much as possible.

Thanks,

Chris

 

[daweeze02]

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[Abel007]

What he said.

 

[sygyzy]

Wow, 24 years old and you already have a CV?

 

[spherrod]

Originally posted by: daweeze02
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[tfinch2]

Originally posted by: sygyzy
Wow, 24 years old and you already have a CV?

The Brits refer to resumes as a CV.

 

[crisp82]

Kids grow up fast these days huh?!

 

[SaturnX]

You look extremely mediocre from your technical skills, you have a majority of "2" / "3" ratings.

 

[crisp82]

Originally posted by: SaturnX
You look extremely mediocre from your technical skills, you have a majority of "2" / "3" ratings.

As I said, hasn't been updated with my current position / skills, but I am looking for help on structure, wording and general 'flow' of the CV / Resume

 

[vi edit]

My wife had a CV at 24. Of course she was in school for 7 years an has the two little letters "Dr." in front of her name.

 

[imported_KuJaX]

Went to help out, but when opening that, it says " This file is hosted by Tripod, a Lycos?Network Site, and is not available for download. Please check out Tripod's Help system for more information about Remote Loading and our Remote Loading policy."

Yes, I right clicked save as the .doc.

 

[Boxxcar]

Originally posted by: crisp82
I have reached that point in my job where it is time to move on and progress. I have not yet put my current position on there, as I wanted to see where I am going wrong and redo completely.

My CV EDIT: (right click, save-as)

I am aiming at Desktop Support, with a view to technical progression.

I appreciate you taking your time to read through it and post your comments.

Please don't be shy. I need this to shine as much as possible.

Thanks,

Chris

LOL - You want to move up to desktop support. That's like helpdesk stuff.

And at 24, what to you do now, clean fans?

Don't aim too high now!

 

[crisp82]

Just to re-iterate, I am looking for help on the wording, layout and flow of the CV.

How can I improve the Objective, Fuctional Summary and the points that I have put in for each position?

Should I put in more points in for my most current position?

Do I need to use more 'Posistive Nouns'?

 

[crisp82]

Anyone?

 

[Vich]

Originally posted by: crisp82
Anyone?

We cant open the file. Otherwise we would help.