Critique my Resume...

crisp82

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I have reached that point in my job where it is time to move on and progress. I have not yet put my current position on there, as I wanted to see where I am going wrong and redo completely.

I am aiming at Desktop Support, with a view to technical progression.

I appreciate you taking your time to read through it and post your comments.

Please don't be shy. I need this to shine as much as possible.

Thanks,

Chris
 

daweeze02

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spherrod

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Originally posted by: daweeze02
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SaturnX

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You look extremely mediocre from your technical skills, you have a majority of "2" / "3" ratings.
 

crisp82

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Originally posted by: SaturnX
You look extremely mediocre from your technical skills, you have a majority of "2" / "3" ratings.


As I said, hasn't been updated with my current position / skills, but I am looking for help on structure, wording and general 'flow' of the CV / Resume
 

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My wife had a CV at 24. Of course she was in school for 7 years an has the two little letters "Dr." in front of her name.
 

imported_KuJaX

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Went to help out, but when opening that, it says " This file is hosted by Tripod, a Lycos?Network Site, and is not available for download. Please check out Tripod's Help system for more information about Remote Loading and our Remote Loading policy."

Yes, I right clicked save as the .doc.
 

Boxxcar

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Originally posted by: crisp82
I have reached that point in my job where it is time to move on and progress. I have not yet put my current position on there, as I wanted to see where I am going wrong and redo completely.

My CV EDIT: (right click, save-as)

I am aiming at Desktop Support, with a view to technical progression.

I appreciate you taking your time to read through it and post your comments.

Please don't be shy. I need this to shine as much as possible.

Thanks,

Chris

LOL - You want to move up to desktop support. That's like helpdesk stuff.

And at 24, what to you do now, clean fans?

Don't aim too high now!

 

crisp82

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Just to re-iterate, I am looking for help on the wording, layout and flow of the CV.

How can I improve the Objective, Fuctional Summary and the points that I have put in for each position?

Should I put in more points in for my most current position?

Do I need to use more 'Posistive Nouns'?
 
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