Does this orginal track hit your musical pallete?

[Naer]

https://soundcloud.com/neits/numbers

If it doesn't, I don't care

 

[deadlyapp]

*palate

 

[Naer]

https://soundcloud.com/neits/inturruption-undoing

 

[ImpulsE69]

sounds like dropping palletes.

 

[deadlyapp]

sounds like dropping palletes.

*pallets

 

[DigDog]

*palate https://www.google.co.uk/search?q=p...ome..69i57&sourceid=chrome&es_sm=122&ie=UTF-8
also, no.
i'm into free jazz and weird time signatures but that song is just a collection of noise.

 

[John Connor]

It's not too bad, but at 12 in with that high pitch what ever synth that is kinda kills it. I like the background synth.

 

[nakedfrog]

Back at this again, are we?

 

[hanoverphist]

that song is just a collection of noise.

this. ill even add "poorly timed" to that noise

 

[Cerpin Taxt]

Needs more cohesion and direction. A song should "tell a story." There should be building tension and resolution. Your track is just a ramble. Also the beat is too hard to follow.

 

[BoomerD]

yeaaaahhhh...nope, not gonna click a Naer link.

 

[Humpy]

mu·sic
ˈmyo͞ozik/
noun
1.
vocal or instrumental sounds (or both) combined in such a way as to produce beauty of form, harmony, and expression of emotion.
"couples were dancing to the music"

 

[11thHour]

I found those painful.

 

[Markbnj]

If it doesn't, I don't care

There's no use claiming that when you just posted it to a public Internet forum for a bunch of strangers to pick apart.

 

[John Connor]

...Internet forum for a bunch of strangers to pick apart.

And that's the golden rule. I've learned not to post my handsome face on public forums for that reason, although I did once here. LOL

 

[HamburgerBoy]

I like the second song more than the first, but I don't think either is bad.

 

[Bubbleawsome]

Something isn't quite there. It's not bad, but it's a bit.... loose? I think maybe you should write a score out, you need to keep an organization to your notes, even if it doesn't sound like it. You can't have unevenly placed notes in places where the notes should have even spacing. Even if that spacing is quarter-dotted eighth-16th-quarter-dotted 8th-16 (It's not a crazy rhythm, just swing, but there aren't crazy split second timing issues and I'm bad at examples) 2nd track is better at this, but still feels rather disjointed. Neither is bad though, show some potential for sure. Here is a track that feels rather random, but has a set rhythm. I'm not saying yours should be so set, but it gives an idea. https://soundcloud.com/ratchetstorytime/walking-pefrected

tl;dr I think the biggest issues are the random instruments and non-linear progression. I may show it to some music majors tomorrow.

 

[MongGrel]

Might be use on a PA with a motion detector to scare away cats and dogs.

You asked.

 

[disappoint]

It's the musical form of word salad.

 

[EliteRetard]

Wish I could help, there's some very interesting sound there.
As others have mentioned though, something is a little off.

I listen to a fair amount of "electronic" music, with or without lyrics. I hear lots of bits I think I recognize, but I spent some time trying to find them and couldn't.

I remember way back in the day playing with a copy of Fruity Loops. That's when I realized how terrible I am with music. Not sure what else to say now...

 

[JSt0rm]

 

[Bubbleawsome]

Stay poverty safe ghost

wait...

 

[EliteRetard]

I'm already poor, so you can suck an egg.