Is this gramatically correct?

[Krassus]

"Don't be afraid of dying while fighting for something you believe in.
Be afraid of dying while regretting not having fought."

 

[Kalvin00]

Yes.

 

[Nocturnal]

Not too sure but it sounds like something you thought up after you watched the Last Samurai.

 

[oog]

i think i would go with "not fighting" over "not having fought"

 

[brigden]

Originally posted by: Krassus
"Don't be afraid of dying while fighting for something you believe in.
Be afraid of dying while regretting not having fought."

Yes, it is correct, but it's retarded. Please, please tell me this isn't a quote for a high school yearbook quote...

 

[edro]

Originally posted by: oog
i think i would go with "not fighting" over "not having fought"

Fighting is present tense. It sounds good to me... You just have to say it a few times to understand the structure of the sentence.