Is this proper grammar?

[TommyVercetti]

Iqara broadband products use Motorola SurfBoard Modems to provide you connectivity at your end. You can buy a modem from us and for some area we also provide modems on sharing basis. And still one more option is there, if you don?t want to buy a modem then you can have a modem on rent. For that you have to give nominal amount as deposit and its refundable.

Found this website looking for broadband companies.

http://www.iqara.net/ip_broadbandsrt.htm#

 

[djNickb]

I would say no, mainly due to the serious readibility issues.

 

[yellowperil]

Give 'em a break, it's a foreign company. There are mistakes all over that site. Like Chris Rock said, [paraphrased] "It's like playing basketball with a retarded kid and calling him for double dribble...you just gotta let some s#!t slide."

 

[Encryptic]

Nope. If that's a foreign site, the bad English grammar is understandable.

 

[TommyVercetti]

Oh, I didn't even notice it was a foreign website. I thought it was some local company. Looking at the rates, that is pretty cheap. It roughly converts into ~$24 for unlimted internet use per month.

 

[SackOfAllTrades]

too verbose. "If you don't want to buy a modem, you can rent one."

EDIT: it's not vulgar enough. "If you don't wanna fsckin buy a fsckin modem, then, fscker, you can fscking rent a fsckin modem. Like I fsckin care."

 

[Amorphus]

And still one more option is there, if you don?t want to buy a modem then you can have a modem on rent.

starting a sentence with a conjunction

comma splice (should be a colon)

missing comma (between "modem" and "then")

those are the mistakes I could be fine.

 

[Ausm]

thanks for the headache

Ausm

 

[screw3d]

I don't think there's really any excuse to put up a business site and not let anyone proficient in English proof-read it first. There are plenty of foreigners who can speak/write perfect English. But I've seen much worse ones though.

 

[marquee]

Originally posted by: Amorphus
And still one more option is there, if you don?t want to buy a modem then you can have a modem on rent.

starting a sentence with a conjunction

comma splice (should be a colon)

missing comma (between "modem" and "then")

those are the mistakes I could be fine.

Starting a sentence with a conjunction is OK.

Comma splice I agree with you.

Missing comma, I think it's OK too. But I'm not sure on that one.

Either way, what a horribly constructed sentence.