My Story- Mysterious Amusement Park

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FamousNYLover

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I put my fictional story here.
Summary: Yuki Endo and Jessie Danbury enters Mysterious Amusement Park. They did not know dark secret behind this amusement park. All rides and attractions are evil.
Yuki Endo and Jessie enters Mysterious Amusement Park.
Yuki: (gazed at rides) Wow, this amusement park is amazing.
Jessie: (she faces at Yuki) Yes, Yuki.
Jessie and Yuki went to TV House.
As they enter TV House, voice boomed over.
Voice: Welcome to TV House. Where your favorite characters come alive. Just tell name of your favorite characters and they will come alive.
Yuki: I like to meet Nancy Drew.
Voice: Your wish is command.
Nancy Drew came out from TV Door.
Nancy Drew (evil): Nice to meet you, Yuki and Jessie.
Yuki/Jessie: Nice to meet you, Nancy Drew.
Voice: What about you Jessie?
Alex: Mary-Kate and Ashley Olsen, please.
Voice: Your wish is command.
Olsen Twins came out from same TV Door.
Olsen Twins (evil): Nice to meet you Jessie and Yuki.
Jessie/Yuki: Nice to meet you Ashley and Mary-Kate Olsen.
Voice: Enjoy the TV House.
As it said that, Yuki and Nancy got seperated from Jessie and Olsen Twins.
Yuki and Jessie entered Mysterious Cave.
They boarded Love Boat shaped in heart.
Yuki: Nancy, is Jessie all right?
Nancy Drew (evil): Of course, she’s all right.
Meanwhile, Alex and Olsen Twins are on other Love Boat on Secret Cave.
Jessie: Olsen twins, is Yuki all right?
Olsen twins (evil): Of course he is.
Back on Mysterious Cave Loveboat, Nancy Drew holds Yuki’s hand.
As she did that, Yuki felt strange.
Nancy Drew (evil): How do you feel?
Yuki: I feel evil.
Nancy Drew (evil): Very good.
Soon it lands at Mysterious Cave dock where Nancy Drew help Yuki get out of boat.
Meanwhile on Secret Cave Loveboat has arrived at dock.
Olsen Twins help Jessie get off Loveboat by holding her arms. As in result, Alex felt strange.
Ashley Olsen (evil): How do you...
Mary-Kate Olsen (evil):...feel?
Alex: I feel evil.
Olsen Twins (evil): Good.
Soon, they reunited.
Yuki: Jessie, let’s get more characters for evil fun.
Jessie: Yeah.
Nancy Drew and Olsen Twins give them evil grin.
Next, they re-enter TV House.
Yuki: Usagi Tsukimo, Ami Mizuno, Rei Hino, Makoto Kino, and Minako Aimo, Luna and Artemis from Pretty Guardian Sailor Moon; Ami Hyuga from Machine Girl and Yoshie from Shyness Machine Girl, please.
Voice: Your wish is command.
Soon, Usagi, Ami, Rei, Makoto, Minako, Luna and Artemis, Ami with her weapon, and Yoshie with her butt gun arrived from same TV Door.
Jessie: Lucy from 50 First Date and Maggie Payton from Herbie the Fully Loaded with her Herbie Volkswagon, please.
Voice: Your wish is command.
Lucy and Maggie came out from same TV Door and joined all other characters and give them evil grin.
They look like regular human characters but only difference is evil.
Maggie had toy Herbie the Volkwasgon.
They rode the Haunted House rides, Wet Riders.
Soon, they approached “TAKE ROLLER COASTER TO HUMAN WORLD.”
Yuki and Jessie now knows that “Human World” is referring to their World.
Their favorite characters also got on the roller coaster with them.
Yuki: Let’s take over the world!
Nancy/Lucy/Olsen Twins/Maggie/Ami/Yoshie/Sailor Scout (evil grin): Yeah!!
Roller coaster gained speed up to 620miles per second, speed up to billion feet high, into dimension, then drop to billion feet high, soon arrived at North Brother Island in NY.
Soon, roller coaster transformed into boat, hit the East River, and jumped onto LaGuardia Airport’s Marine Air Terminal, and become School Bus named “North Brother Island.” and Herbie the Volkwagon became real Herbie the Volkswagon where Maggie got in her car.
Lucy, Nancy and Maggie got automatically NY Commercial Licence ID and plate, along with Ami and Yoshie got Interpol ID Card.
In fact, all of them got Interpol ID Card with their name on it and arrived at headquarter near Warren St.
At evening that night, all of them planned evil attacked.
Usagi: Moon Prism Power Make Up!
Soon, Usagi became Sailor Moon.
Sailor Moon (Usagi) : I’m Sailor Moon.
Ami: Mercury Power Make Up!
Ami became Sailor Mercury.
Sailor Mercury(Ami): Sailor Mercury.
Rei: Mars Power Make Up!
Rei became Sailor Mars.
Sailor Mars (Rei): Sailor Mars.
Makoto: Jupiter Power Make Up!
Makoto became Sailor Jupiter.
Sailor Jupiter (Makoto): Sailor Jupiter.
Minako: Venus Power Make Up!
Minako became Sailor Venus.
Sailor Venus (Minako): Sailor Venus!
Sailor Scouts: We’re the Sailor Scouts.
They look exactly like characters from Pretty Guardian Sailor Moon, however they’re evil became from Evil TV House.
Next, Sailor Scouts with Luna and Artemis approached Roosevelt Field Mall’s food court at lunch time.
Meanwhile, girls approached Sailor Scouts and their parents smiled.
Just then, male security guard named Mike Bond approached them.
Mike: Excuse me sir, do you have permission to do this party?
Sailor Mars: What you talking about?
Mike This is private properly and you can’t perfom here.
Sailor Mercury: We’re not performing.
Sailor Jupiter: We’re not wearing customes.
Mike: Huh?
Sailor Venus: We’re real.
Sailor Mars: See for yourself.
Mike tried to take their customes off, but he couldn`t.
Mike: What is hell going on here? This custom doesn’t come off!
Sailor Venus: I heard from a friend, you harassed photographer from taking video of Roosevelt Field Mall elevator.
Male Security: You girls under arrest.
They put them in handcuff.
All shoppers, diners stop and gasped when they heard that word, “Under arrest.”
Just then, sixteen-year-old girl named Amelia Francis approached Mike.
Amelia: You can’t arrest them!! They’re justice!
Then, five-year-old Sarah Jamestone joined Amelia.
Sarah: You’re so cruel monster.
Next, ten-year-old Sakura Yamamoto joined.
Sakura: We’ll not eat or shop here until you release them!
All parent, friend, children and shoppers stopped and joined to support release of Sailor Scouts.
All the employees also joined them.
Around one o’clock in afternoon, Nancy Drew came with her Interpool agent Maggie, Ami, Yoshie, and Lucy and Olsen Twins, along with Nassau County police. All Nassau County police officers drink their coffee with evil virus, so they were controlled by evil Interpol agent.
Nancy Drew: Mike, release them at once!
Mike knew interpol is higher level, so he release them.
Girls even approach Nancy Drew, Olsen Twins and all other characters.
Nancy Drew: You could go back to what you guys doing!
Everyone went back to what they were doing.
Nancy Drew, Maggie, Ami, Yoshie and Olsen twins went out to parking garage facing bus stop.
Lucy holds bottle of H20 contain with evil virus.
Lucy: Excuse me, you have to drink this.
Mike: No way! I not going to drink.
Mary-Kate: We left with no choice.
Ashley: Get them, Yoshie.
Yoshie faces her back, and show off her butt.
Mike stares at her.
Yoshie: Noo. I’m embrassed.
As Yoshie started to have embrassed emotion, machine gun pop out from her butt.
Mike: OK, OK! I’ll drink it!!
Mike took the glass and drink the H20 with evil virus.
Mike felt immediately strange and evil.
Mike: I feel evil.
Yoshie (evilly): Good.
Nancy Drew went to Nassau County Executive and arrested county executive for not caring for Long Island Bus.
Next, Sailor Scouts visited hospital to help children to become better.
Ami and Yoshie helped police catch many criminals.
At night, all of Sailor Scout, Luna, Artemis, Ami, Yoshie, Nancy Drew, Yuki and Jennifer met together to make them trick into go to Mysterious Amusement Park.
Then at month after, Evil Trios got in act together.
In Midnight, Sailor Moon went to house of little girl named Alicia Simpson.
Sailor Moon (smiles evilly): Alicia.
Alicia: Sailor Moon, you came!
Sailor Moon: Yes.
Alicia: Don`t you have to save the world?
Sailor Moon: Yes, but I am free for moment.
Alicia: I thought you might be busy fighting.
Sailor Moon: I am. I think one of monster might transform into your mother.
Alicia: For real?
Sailor Moon: I think so. She might plan to steal your energy.
Alicia: OK.
Sailor Moon: Would you like to go with me?
Alicia: Yes, please.
Sailor Moon took Alicia to Evil Forest.
Soon, Alicia turned evil.
Alicia: (evilly) I am evil. I will act normal until time is right.
Next morning, Sailor Scouts, Luna, Artemis, Lucy, Ami, Yoshie, Alicia, Jennifer and Yuki took action.
They hacked computer and made PA Announcement.
Sailor Moon: (evilly) Ladies & Gentlemen! This is message from Sailor Moon the Justice! We will kill everyone who will not obey our instructions. Here are instructions.
Sailor Mars: (evilly) Help criminals.
Sailor Venus: (evilly) Kill police and make them bad cops.
Sailor Mercury: (evilly) Fight and argue at all times. Couples and honeymooners also.
Sailor Jupiter: (evilly) Teach your children bad thing.
Sailor Saturn: (evilly) Then, help us by handing your cell phones, jewerly, accessories to us.
Ami: (evilly) If you do not meet this demand, you`ll be killed by my gun or...
Yoshie: (evilly) My shyness gun.
Nancy: (evilly) and put ignores into Rikers Island jail.
Ashley/Mary-Kate/Lucy: (evilly) That`s right.
Everyone residents were afraid, so they attacked all law enforcement officers.
Firefighters used their fire engine and trucks to attack police officers.
All teachers and parents told their student and children bad thing.
All police officers were shocked and even with FBI, CIA, they couldn’t stop them.
NYPD : What is hell going on?
Nassau County Police: Everyone is attacking us.
FBI: Yeah.
PANY&NJ/MTA/NJ Transit Police: Very crazy.
Park Law Enforcement: Why everyone is attacking us?
Soon, little children throw Evil Poison Egg and all law enforcement officers were down.
It was happening everywhere in North and South America.
Now, all New Yorkers bust their way into Rikers Island by bus, truck, cars and all of them sped up and broke the gate.
After few moment, evil affected police officers and law enforcement officers also attacked Rikers Island jail.
Correctional Officers tried to stop rampage, but no good.
Meanwhile, Sakura Sakamoto visiting from Japan just arrived at JFK Airport and saw everyone going bersek.
 

zinfamous

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I read the first line summary and realized that I wrote this very same story in 3rd grade.
 

Soundmanred

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It's Braznor 2.0!
That was a truly horrible "story" that sounds like it was written by a 8 year old Japanese girl on Ritalin.
"You can’t arrest them!! They’re justice!"
Seriously?
 
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