OMG. You GOT TO read this! Scary!

[galt]

Might be a repost. Did a search, couldn't find anything with "cave" in it.

here

It might be a hoax, but even so, held my attention for a good while. What do you guys think? Oh, and read EVERYTHING. Don't skip parts. It's worth it.

 

[Mill]

Pop ups made it unreadable.

 

[Hooligan]

reading it because i've got nothing else to do .... this better be worth it

 

[Legendary]

Don't have the attention span/motivation, and the popups are really annoying.

 

[galt]

Originally posted by: Millenium
Pop ups made it unreadable.

There's one pop-up per page. It's not that annoying.

 

[JeremyJoe]

Ill tell you what's scares me, the town of Galt

 

[idNut]

Could you just give us a synopsis of what makes this so scary? I don't like reading anything long on a monitor, it's already cost me two pairs of glasses.

 

[Hooligan]

why's that scary?

 

[gigapet]

CAN i get a synopsis this is far to long to read..........you must entice me to read it

 

[galt]

Its ten pages of stuff. Basically, this guy and his pal go exploring some cave, find a small hole, bust it open to find a passage from where they can hear weird/scary noises. So the thinner of the two decides to go in to see what's inside.

Its a good read.

 

[MaxDSP]

Originally posted by: Legendary
Don't have the attention span/motivation, and the popups are really annoying.

yep, same here

can someone summarize?

 

[gigapet]

ok they investigate the noises and then the story ends?

i think they are bats have you ever seen goonies?

 

[Bluga]

ok i'm on page7, trying to stay awake.

 

[rh71]

If you like reading a short novel, this website is for you. I just wasted 10 minutes reading some of what was highlighted in blue. Intruiging, but not worth the time.

 

[rudder]

On page 9. The intrepid explorer discovers that a rock has moved and there is a deep hole. He feels evil from the hole.... oooohhh weeee oooohhh.

I only made it to page 9 cause I skipped 1-7 and just looked at the pictures. Just start at page 8.

 

[ThreeLeggedGnome]

I didnt read the whole thing but it sounded like some caveman scratched some symbols on the wall while taking a dump. Big deal. I do that all the time on my bathroom wall.

 

[Bluga]

ok so the story ended??

i just wasted my time.

 

[rudder]

yeh, page 11 is a dead link. Maybe the guy got sucked into the hole he discovered and couldn't finish his website.

 

[Modeps]

wasted my time.

 

[Kenazo]

Dam it I want a refund. I invested too much time to be ripped off by a dead link. I guess the guy realized after 15 pages that his story only worked by exploiting the anticipation of "evieel" and thus couldn't come up with a satisfactory ending. Anyways, second rate dime store horror/fiction...you would get a 1 if I wasn't so lazy.

Btw if you can't tell this is a "hoax"

 

[gotsmack]

haha, it doesn't have an ending

 

[Maverick2002]

I can't believe I got suckered into reading 3 pages of that. Until I browsed forward and found pictures of some stupid ass rock. I didn't even know what they were pointing to. At first I thought the one on the right was a face or something. Maybe it's one of those Rorschak (sp?) thingies?

 

[kami]

page 9 was non-stop goosebumps for me. i read all 10 pages :Q

hoax or not, it was well written. i wonder why he didn't continue.

if it's a hoax, awesome little story
if it's true, :Q:Q:Q:Q:Q:Q:Q:Q

 

[diskop]

That was pretty damn scary! I read all 10 pages of it, sort of like a short story. Basically at the end (p. 10) he says he's going to go into the cave again and post again right after he gets back. However the NEXT link on the bottom of 10 just leads back to 10, meaning there is no 11 and he didn't update.

Although scary at first, what I found to be interesting is why he would have a NEXT link before he had a NEXT page? Why would he put a link to the next page when he hasn't written it yet. So I'm thinking it's a bit of a hoax, eh? Good read nonetheless

 

[kami]

The thing is, if it was a well known hoax, it would be on snopes.com...but I can't find it on there