OMG. You GOT TO read this! Scary!

[Sundog]

A nice break in the monotony...

 

[ZeroBurn]

1) refuses to give any information on who or where anything is for confirmation
2) pictures don't turn up huh? how convenient
3) our avid caver forgets batteries and backup helmut. sweet deal
4) ... and the video camera
5) why is everyone so suddenly concerned after he returns from the cave?
6) i like the way he signs the last page of his journal. if you're expecting to return you don't generally sign a conclusion and tag it, "Love, Ted".

blair witch has already been done, give it up ted

wasted my whole morning, bah

i want to hear an avid caver's point of view to see if any of his techniques are accurate.

 

[brnbngls]

As my signature says, education through curiosity. And I learned something from reading that.....don't read that.

 

[Wallydraigle]

Originally posted by: LordMaul
The fact that the missing last page elicited an emotional response is testament to the success of the writing style.


Fvck you! NO! He sucks! He can kiss my ass! It was bullsh!t! I wasted my time!! ARGGHHH!!!

I WILL HUNT HIS ASS DOWN!!





OK, well, maybe you're right...

 

[dolph]

nice ghost story, ala blair witch project. ending is good, too. but yeah, probably a hoax.

 

[LordMaul]

Originally posted by: lirion

Originally posted by: LordMaul
The fact that the missing last page elicited an emotional response is testament to the success of the writing style.


Fvck you! NO! He sucks! He can kiss my ass! It was bullsh!t! I wasted my time!! ARGGHHH!!!

I WILL HUNT HIS ASS DOWN!!





OK, well, maybe you're right...

What are you grinning at, butthead?

I've got my Tedgun cleaned and loaded, and me is gonna hunt some Teds...

 

[VTBigBear]

nice lord Maul..


damnit... someone finish the damn story...

 

[aswedc]

I finished it. Could have done without that long page about caving in the beginning, but cool story

 

[jjones]

B and Ted's Excellent Adventure!

 

[Smaulz]

Okay major skoorb thingy goin on... I think we've already established that the story is fictional, and that it's still a good read. However, folks still keep piping up saying it's gotta be a hoax, like this is news or something... jeez, guys... get over it. It's a cool story... yeah, it's been done, but then again, what hasn't?

 

[kami]

wasted my whole morning, bah

wow you read slow

 

[Electric Amish]

Originally posted by: jjones
B and Ted's Excellent Adventure!

Nice!

amish

 

[Wallydraigle]

Originally posted by: LordMaul

Originally posted by: lirion

Originally posted by: LordMaul
The fact that the missing last page elicited an emotional response is testament to the success of the writing style.


Fvck you! NO! He sucks! He can kiss my ass! It was bullsh!t! I wasted my time!! ARGGHHH!!!

I WILL HUNT HIS ASS DOWN!!





OK, well, maybe you're right...

What are you grinning at, butthead?

I've got my Tedgun cleaned and loaded, and me is gonna hunt some Teds...

 

[boi]

When I started to see things on a regular basis I purchased a gun. Got it from an ad in the paper so I didn't have to wait for a permit.

What kind of permit is he talking about?

 

[BigPotato]

freaky story!

awesome!! i was so pissed that there was no page 11!!

 

[ZeroBurn]

Originally posted by: jjones
B and Ted's Excellent Adventure!

haha, didn't even notice that. good catch

 

[ZeroBurn]

Originally posted by: kami

wasted my whole morning, bah

wow you read slow

you don't make fun of my disssability !

 

[AZGamer]

Note from the owner of JRLWeb.com:

"It is not my story. I am mirroring the site. The orginal website was found online at Yahoo! free pages. No contact information to the author can be found and it stops at page 10. I found it only a few days ago and am interested in finding the author to talk to him. I'll pass this email to him if I ever find him.
Thanks,
Josh"

 

[0ops]

if you don't want to read it all, then you don't care what happens, right?

 

[Ipno]

If you download the .zip file you can see its a word document. Pretty neat story really, probably earned him an A in his creative writing class.

 

[Synoptic]

Originally posted by: boi

When I started to see things on a regular basis I purchased a gun. Got it from an ad in the paper so I didn't have to wait for a permit.

What kind of permit is he talking about?

In a lot of states, you have to wait like a week to get a handgun, that way you can't get mad about something, then go buy a gun pissed off and shoot somebody. I think they also run background checks.

The story was great, true or not. It kinda was interesting where it talks about "B, Joe, and I" cause 2 of my good friends who I used to cause lots of trouble with are B and Joe. Just made it a little more interesting for me...

 

[smp]

Originally posted by: BigPotato
freaky story! awesome!! i was so pissed that there was no page 11!!

There was no page 11 cause the guy DIED .. so put your tedguns away cause he's freakin' dead and nobody cares and the story wasn't even well written and it was long and fvcking boring as hell and if I wasn't getting paid sh!t money to sit on my ass, I wouldn't have read it. It was just too played out, it read like a B movie .. the forgotten camera, the negatives that didn't turn out .. come on! Joe didn't talk? Joe is a moron, so is B and so is fvcking Ted. And Kami, I'm dissapointed in you, you go from such brilliant adventure literature like LOTR to this and still like it?

 

[Omegachi]

i actually liked the story.wasted like an hour or so reading it. It was a pretty creepy story, but i can tell its fictional. good reading tho

 

[iamwiz82]

Originally posted by: smp

Originally posted by: BigPotato
freaky story! awesome!! i was so pissed that there was no page 11!!

There was no page 11 cause the guy DIED .. so put your tedguns away cause he's freakin' dead and nobody cares and the story wasn't even well written and it was long and fvcking boring as hell and if I wasn't getting paid sh!t money to sit on my ass, I wouldn't have read it. It was just too played out, it read like a B movie .. the forgotten camera, the negatives that didn't turn out .. come on! Joe didn't talk? Joe is a moron, so is B and so is fvcking Ted. And Kami, I'm dissapointed in you, you go from such brilliant adventure literature like LOTR to this and still like it?[/q

you are the epitome of a nerd, and i mean that in a bad way. If it doesnt have gay wizards and trolls running around its no good?

 

[Alphazero]

Pretty good read, but probably not the best thing to do before going to bed at 5 am....