Poem I just wrote

[The Batt?sai]

Almost done
Almost out of time
Almost gone
Soon
It won?t belong

You want your space
You feel guilty
When I say
I never hit you
I never cheated on you
What am I doing wrong

We talk maybe once a week
Once every two weeks
When once it was everyday
The talks are good
It makes me feel hope
My semester is almost done

You say we will stay together
You say we will work it out
I feel happy
I won?t have to be without
The next day you say its over

I think of October
I knew that was the last time
I would hold you
Kiss you
Touch you
Look into your eyes

You just confirmed it
But you say you made a mistake
But you don?t want to try again
You say you drink yourself to sleep
You don?t wanna talk about us
Getting back together

Time has passed
I find out you are
6 months pregnant
From someone new
Someone you are not even with
Well I was going to stay with you
Why did you get an abortion for ours

Your new pregnancy
Gave me the closure I needed
That you never gave
But I still miss you
And remember the days
That would have been anniversaries

My purpose in life
Was to be with you
Build a life with you
I?m still not sure
What my new purpose is

Maybe its just like life, just pointless..
I wait for someone
That will never come home

 

[imported_Scourge]

Emo.

 

[The Batt?sai]

Originally posted by: Scourge
Emo.

no i'm not gonna kill myself

 

[LordMaul]

Please, don't do that again. Ever.

 

[The Batt?sai]

Originally posted by: LordMaul
Please, don't do that again. Ever.

do what?

 

[McGyver]

sentimental... fool...

 

[Crescent13]

Originally posted by: Scourge
Emo.

 

[LordMaul]

Originally posted by: quasarsky

Originally posted by: LordMaul
Please, don't do that again. Ever.

do what?

The atrocity above. YOU did it. You are responsible for...that. :music:

 

[QED]

You are in denial, man.

EMO all the way...

 

[The Batt?sai]

Originally posted by: Crescent13

Originally posted by: Scourge
Emo.

i can't believe i helped you with that sig. what a loser :frown:

 

[AlgaeEater]

Originally posted by: quasarsky
Almost done
Almost out of time
Almost gone
Soon
It won?t belong

You want your space
You feel guilty
When I say
I never hit you
I never cheated on you
What am I doing wrong

We talk maybe once a week
Once every two weeks
When once it was everyday
The talks are good
It makes me feel hope
My semester is almost done

You say we will stay together
You say we will work it out
I feel happy
I won?t have to be without
The next day you say its over

I think of October
I knew that was the last time
I would hold you
Kiss you
Touch you
Look into your eyes

You just confirmed it
But you say you made a mistake
But you don?t want to try again
You say you drink yourself to sleep
You don?t wanna talk about us
Getting back together

Time has passed
I find out you are
6 months pregnant
From someone new
Someone you are not even with
Well I was going to stay with you
Why did you get an abortion for ours

I whistled for a cab and when I came near
The license plate said 'Fresh'
And had dice in the mirror
If anything i could say that this cab was rare
But I thought 'Nah, forget it - Yo, home to Bel-Air!'

I pulled up to the house at bout seven or eight
I yelled to the cabbie 'Yo home, smell ya later!'
I looked at my kingdom, I was finally there!
To sit on my throne as the prince of Bel-Air!

I'm trying to understand what you mean in your poem? I don't get the last part.

 

[Crescent13]

Originally posted by: quasarsky

Originally posted by: Crescent13

Originally posted by: Scourge
Emo.

i can't believe i helped you with that sig. what a loser :frown:

Lol sry.

 

[The Batt?sai]

Originally posted by: AlgaeEater

Originally posted by: quasarsky
Almost done
Almost out of time
Almost gone
Soon
It won?t belong

You want your space
You feel guilty
When I say
I never hit you
I never cheated on you
What am I doing wrong

We talk maybe once a week
Once every two weeks
When once it was everyday
The talks are good
It makes me feel hope
My semester is almost done

You say we will stay together
You say we will work it out
I feel happy
I won?t have to be without
The next day you say its over

I think of October
I knew that was the last time
I would hold you
Kiss you
Touch you
Look into your eyes

You just confirmed it
But you say you made a mistake
But you don?t want to try again
You say you drink yourself to sleep
You don?t wanna talk about us
Getting back together

Time has passed
I find out you are
6 months pregnant
From someone new
Someone you are not even with
Well I was going to stay with you
Why did you get an abortion for ours

I whistled for a cab and when I came near
The license plate said 'Fresh'
And had dice in the mirror
If anything i could say that this cab was rare
But I thought 'Nah, forget it - Yo, home to Bel-Air!'

I pulled up to the house at bout seven or eight
I yelled to the cabbie 'Yo home, smell ya later!'
I looked at my kingdom, I was finally there!
To sit on my throne as the prince of Bel-Air!

I'm trying to understand what you mean in your poem? I don't get the last part.

 

[The Batt?sai]

Originally posted by: Crescent13

Originally posted by: quasarsky

Originally posted by: Crescent13

Originally posted by: Scourge
Emo.

i can't believe i helped you with that sig. what a loser :frown:

Lol sry.

if i am i'm gonna take you with me

 

[CarlKillerMiller]

Originally posted by: AlgaeEater

Originally posted by: quasarsky
Almost done
Almost out of time
Almost gone
Soon
It won?t belong

You want your space
You feel guilty
When I say
I never hit you
I never cheated on you
What am I doing wrong

We talk maybe once a week
Once every two weeks
When once it was everyday
The talks are good
It makes me feel hope
My semester is almost done

You say we will stay together
You say we will work it out
I feel happy
I won?t have to be without
The next day you say its over

I think of October
I knew that was the last time
I would hold you
Kiss you
Touch you
Look into your eyes

You just confirmed it
But you say you made a mistake
But you don?t want to try again
You say you drink yourself to sleep
You don?t wanna talk about us
Getting back together

Time has passed
I find out you are
6 months pregnant
From someone new
Someone you are not even with
Well I was going to stay with you
Why did you get an abortion for ours

I whistled for a cab and when I came near
The license plate said 'Fresh'
And had dice in the mirror
If anything i could say that this cab was rare
But I thought 'Nah, forget it - Yo, home to Bel-Air!'

I pulled up to the house at bout seven or eight
I yelled to the cabbie 'Yo home, smell ya later!'
I looked at my kingdom, I was finally there!
To sit on my throne as the prince of Bel-Air!

I'm trying to understand what you mean in your poem? I don't get the last part.

bahahaha

Genius.

 

[Cerpin Taxt]

I have killed.
I have helped kill.
I have killed part of myself.
I cannot change this, I.
I must seek Buddha.
I must seek Christ.

 

[lrad50]

Originally posted by: CarlKillerMiller

Originally posted by: AlgaeEater

Originally posted by: quasarsky
Almost done
Almost out of time
Almost gone
Soon
It won?t belong

You want your space
You feel guilty
When I say
I never hit you
I never cheated on you
What am I doing wrong

We talk maybe once a week
Once every two weeks
When once it was everyday
The talks are good
It makes me feel hope
My semester is almost done

You say we will stay together
You say we will work it out
I feel happy
I won?t have to be without
The next day you say its over

I think of October
I knew that was the last time
I would hold you
Kiss you
Touch you
Look into your eyes

You just confirmed it
But you say you made a mistake
But you don?t want to try again
You say you drink yourself to sleep
You don?t wanna talk about us
Getting back together

Time has passed
I find out you are
6 months pregnant
From someone new
Someone you are not even with
Well I was going to stay with you
Why did you get an abortion for ours

I whistled for a cab and when I came near
The license plate said 'Fresh'
And had dice in the mirror
If anything i could say that this cab was rare
But I thought 'Nah, forget it - Yo, home to Bel-Air!'

I pulled up to the house at bout seven or eight
I yelled to the cabbie 'Yo home, smell ya later!'
I looked at my kingdom, I was finally there!
To sit on my throne as the prince of Bel-Air!

I'm trying to understand what you mean in your poem? I don't get the last part.

bahahaha

Genius.

BAHAHAHHAHAHAH
you get my elite vote!

 

[Crescent13]

Originally posted by: lrad50

Originally posted by: CarlKillerMiller

Originally posted by: AlgaeEater

Originally posted by: quasarsky
Almost done
Almost out of time
Almost gone
Soon
It won?t belong

You want your space
You feel guilty
When I say
I never hit you
I never cheated on you
What am I doing wrong

We talk maybe once a week
Once every two weeks
When once it was everyday
The talks are good
It makes me feel hope
My semester is almost done

You say we will stay together
You say we will work it out
I feel happy
I won?t have to be without
The next day you say its over

I think of October
I knew that was the last time
I would hold you
Kiss you
Touch you
Look into your eyes

You just confirmed it
But you say you made a mistake
But you don?t want to try again
You say you drink yourself to sleep
You don?t wanna talk about us
Getting back together

Time has passed
I find out you are
6 months pregnant
From someone new
Someone you are not even with
Well I was going to stay with you
Why did you get an abortion for ours

I whistled for a cab and when I came near
The license plate said 'Fresh'
And had dice in the mirror
If anything i could say that this cab was rare
But I thought 'Nah, forget it - Yo, home to Bel-Air!'

I pulled up to the house at bout seven or eight
I yelled to the cabbie 'Yo home, smell ya later!'
I looked at my kingdom, I was finally there!
To sit on my throne as the prince of Bel-Air!

I'm trying to understand what you mean in your poem? I don't get the last part.

bahahaha

Genius.

BAHAHAHHAHAHAH
you get my elite vote!

I SECOND!