poetry

[OOBradm]

Never wrote much poetry.
But tonight I was in the mood.
tell me what this makes you feel / think:



picture a fern
placed by the window
which grows
away from the sun

 

[Goosemaster]

response: dis-ingenuousness / disrespectful / ungrateful

 

[OOBradm]

explanation:

people get so caught up in life, they forget the things that are important.

though it's interesting other people have different first reactions.

Edit #2: goosemaster I liked your thoughts I didn't think of that 10 minutes ago when I wrote it

 

[Goosemaster]

Originally posted by: OOBradm
explanation:

people get so caught up in life, they forget the things that are important.

what...we aren't allowed to see what we see now?

 

[Journer]

my haiku:

lasagna is good
cheese and meat makes me happy
but my ass still burns

 

[The Boston Dangler]

Originally posted by: OOBradm
explanation:

people get so caught up in life, they forget the things that are important.

though it's interesting other people have different first reactions.

you have shattered the imagery for everyone. now i may never feel complete. thanks for that, jerk.

 

[The Boston Dangler]

Originally posted by: Journer
my haiku:

lasagna is good
cheese and meat makes me happy
but my ass still burns

brilliant! factual, succinct, cheeky. it takes me to a happy place. i am complete again.

 

[jagec]

Originally posted by: OOBradm
Never wrote much poetry.
But tonight I was in the mood.
tell me what this makes you feel / think:



picture a fern
placed by the window
which grows
away from the sun

This will never happen
because the plant hormone auxin
which is secreted by the apical meristem
promotes phototropism.

Sorry, I've been studying for the Bio GRE.

 

[Goosemaster]

my go:

unrivaled this leader was on his perch above the clouds
unchallenged for fear of retribution, unquestioned for lack of quantification

there was the old wise man who dared to look up and gaze at this lord of all that was with his old dried eyes
this man saw what was up there and yet never said a word.
this man, this hero, this saint, this sinner, this outcast, was never heard of again.

 

[Goosemaster]

Originally posted by: jagec

Originally posted by: OOBradm
Never wrote much poetry.
But tonight I was in the mood.
tell me what this makes you feel / think:



picture a fern
placed by the window
which grows
away from the sun

This will never happen
because the plant hormone auxin
which is secreted by the apical meristem
promotes phototropism.

Sorry, I've been studying for the Bio GRE.

your a good man:beer:

 

[Journer]

a japanese haiku:

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in romaji:
bi-ru ga su-ki
mai-ni-chi-ni-no-mi-tai
ba-ka-ni-na-ru

translation:
i like beer
i want to drink every day
i become stupid

 

[Goosemaster]

that smile
that kiss
that thought
but
that smile
was it bought?

 

[oiprocs]

A poet is wack,
if lyrics talk smack,
one can hate for that,
tragic really, an act,
shade that to a surface lack,
in attempt to strangle - asthma attack,
remains yet a fact,
a solution is slack,
for a poet who's wack.

______________________________

Trust in me,
simple see,
give to me,
faith be free,
yes is me,
woe is thee,
Trust in me,
you shall see.

 

[Goosemaster]

the syncopating absence
louder than the silence
quieter than the harmony

how bold and how powerful that moment can be
when you simply pause to listen to what was not there,
and there, by all accounts, will ever be

 

[Rip the Jacker]

ATOTers stay on teh computar neffing all day
Meh.. they aren't as bad as the Chinese guy who died in an internet cafe
Hit the reply button and your e-penis grows longer and longer
Taejin is lame, just found out about Kanye's "Stronger"
People with posts higher than 40k need to go outside
Actually we should just stop using the internet worldwide
Nevermind, what am I thinking what will I be without pron
I think I'll stop posting, get in bed, let my thing out and get it on

 

[QED]

I Found this gem etched in the wood counter of a local bar back when I was in grad school:

for i long to
behold
those indelible things
as such

that I should suppose
one word
of prose would be
too much

 

[oiprocs]

It's hard to trust a woman you lust,
when all you want is to bust a nut,
It sucks to just fuck and not stay,
to touch which must be the connection you lust.

 

[oiprocs]

A faithful man can get broken into, damn,
that woman is a thief, in the dark she creeps,
with a reason to seek all the jewels he keeps.

 

[Journer]

ok..ill try these crazy nonsensical american poems :

Lactose intolerance
_______________________________
i feel my ass
exploding with gas
a force to be reckoned
almost never beckoned
the juices flow
like drops of snow
but the act makes me perspire
my ass is on fire!
damn you succulent, warm, versatile beast!
your liquids and fats are quite a feast
but my asshole will turn loose
the acid that my stomach will produce
your nectar is a blessing, and a curse
hey, quick! call a nurse!

 

[oiprocs]

Why don't you step back, think about it real slow,
this girl is fucking you slow and squeezing dollars like hoes,
Keeping her is nice, but the price ain't right,
Even Barker will say, this bit** is nothing but play.

 

[The Boston Dangler]

growing a goatee
passing judgement on others
it's open mic night

 

[Goosemaster]

Originally posted by: Oiprocs
It's hard to trust a woman you lust,
when all you want is to bust a nut,
It sucks to just fuck and not stay,
to touch which must be the connection you lust.

then that one soul comes along
beautiful thoughts and euqally beautiful thighs
you long to be yourself and want to take her to bed
yet, ringing loudly, deafly even, is the desire not to, within your head

this affliction of conscience collision
this truly inebriated decision
what is one to do
to long to fvk and yet
to long far greater to coo

 

[kindest]

violets are red
roses are blue
i got to go poo

 

[Rip the Jacker]

roses are red
violets are blue
this doesn't rhyme
so fvck you

 

[Goosemaster]

Originally posted by: Journer
ok..ill try these crazy nonsensical american poems :

Lactose intolerance
_______________________________
i feel my ass
exploding with gas
a force to be reckoned
almost never beckoned
the juices flow
like drops of snow
but the act makes me perspire
my ass is on fire!
damn you succulent, warm, versatile beast!
your liquids and fats are quite a feast
but my asshole will turn loose
the acid that my stomach will produce
your nectar is a blessing, and a curse
hey, quick! call a nurse!

my good chef man
think about what you wish to do
you work with such pride on that spicy stew
knowing all the while that in the restroom it will end up as a creamy fondue