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[Naer]

 

[lxskllr]

Is that a bit of the Westworld theme I hear in there? Parts sounded almost familiar. I heard a lot of good stuff there, with some strange transitions and pauses. I think it needs more time, but you'll really have something if you put the time in.

 

[nakedfrog]

I don't know if all the dissonant bits are intentional or mistakes, if the latter, that's fine, I still make my share of mistakes too. If intentional, while I can definitely appreciate well-applied dissonance, I don't think they serve the piece. Seems like a marked improvement over the stuff you shared back when.

 

[DigDog]

Amazon.com

 

[Torn Mind]

Clearly, someone made for and sensitive to the 19th century.

Load up on some Debussy and Chopin nocturnes to get some insights.

 

[Naer]

Wat do you think of this one?

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[Naer]

How about this composition?

 

[lxskllr]

Reminds me a bit of Gershwin. As before, shows lots of promise, but could use some refinement.