Shorty, very scary story

[halik]

Originally posted by: spherrod

Originally posted by: chuckywang

Originally posted by: screw3d
Try this for scary <-- repost

It's graphic, and you've been warned!

That's not scary, that's just disgusting.

QFT - that is sick

boo none of those are even remotely beliavable

 

[Accipiter22]

Originally posted by: screw3d
Try this for scary <-- repost

It's graphic, and you've been warned!

awesome!

 

[Don Vito Corleone]

Originally posted by: screw3d
Try this for scary <-- repost

It's graphic, and you've been warned!

Ack! I had to stop reading once it was clear where that was going. I think I'd throw up or pass out.

 

[Atomicus]

Originally posted by: michaels
Wow that was a great short story, the guys vivid use of language and technical writing is superb. he really pulls the reader in.

I got pulled into a coma from reading that garble. MS Word's thesaurus FTW?

 

[Special K]

Originally posted by: uhohs

Originally posted by: screw3d
Try this for scary <-- repost

It's graphic, and you've been warned!

...

Wow, that is disgusting.

 

[pontifex]

Originally posted by: Special K
The cave story was actually ripped off of another similar cave story that had an ending. If you search for the original thread on here you can read it. The ending is incredibly lame though. The story is much better when you are left to wonder why there is no ending.

err..no its not.

i'd rather have something to end it, like a message from the guy's parents saying that he never returned from the cave, than to be left hanging like that.

 

[Bartino]

interesting story, but LONG...

 

[mk52]

Originally posted by: Special K
The cave story was actually ripped off of another similar cave story that had an ending. If you search for the original thread on here you can read it. The ending is incredibly lame though. The story is much better when you are left to wonder why there is no ending.

lame or not what is it?

 

[fbrdphreak]

Originally posted by: Special K

Originally posted by: uhohs

Originally posted by: screw3d
Try this for scary <-- repost

It's graphic, and you've been warned!

...

Wow, that is disgusting.

Seriously freakin' crazy

 

[The Batt?sai]

Originally posted by: Dangerer
LOL. life lessons to be learned

ugh

 

[aircooled]

I can't believe I read that whole damn cave story.

 

[HeroOfPellinor]

Originally posted by: aircooled
I can't believe I read that whole damn cave story.

So did I. I thought it was well done till right near the end.

 

[wazzledoozle]

Originally posted by: pontifex
wtf, where is page 11??

go through all that BS only to not get any kind of ending?

The point is that its supposed to be a journal and they dont return from the cave! Read the whole thing next time.

 

[JulesMaximus]

Originally posted by: wazzledoozle
That cave story is more of a horror story.

And old as dirt.

Welcome to the internet.

 

[Don Vito Corleone]

Originally posted by: wazzledoozle

Originally posted by: pontifex
wtf, where is page 11??

go through all that BS only to not get any kind of ending?

The point is that its supposed to be a journal and they dont return from the cave! Read the whole thing next time.

I do kinda wish they'd provided an epilogue of some kind. Apparently the story is adapted from a short story that has an outlandish ending, but the short story doesn't seem to be available online anywhere nowadays.

 

[athithi]

If you want a *real* cave story that is more thrilling than scary, read Raising the Dead. It's a true story and I felt it was beautifully written.

 

[hans030390]

I read some old comments on some forums online (google "ted the caver") and there are some interesting details showing the origin of this story.

Apparently there is more to the story, and people have read the rest of it, but the links are too old to get the rest of it

Likely a fake story, still a good read. I don't necessarily doubt that something like this could happen. We only know so much about earth.

 

[Special K]

Originally posted by: pontifex

Originally posted by: Special K
The cave story was actually ripped off of another similar cave story that had an ending. If you search for the original thread on here you can read it. The ending is incredibly lame though. The story is much better when you are left to wonder why there is no ending.

err..no its not.

i'd rather have something to end it, like a message from the guy's parents saying that he never returned from the cave, than to be left hanging like that.

Alright, I found the original thread but the link to the story is dead. I tried searching on google for the story but I can't find it anywhere.

Here is the original thread:

Link

EDIT: A-ha, found it:

Link to original story (apparently)

 

[God On Alcohol]

HOLY SH!T :Q:Q:Q:Q:Q:Q:Q:Q:Q:Q:Q:Q:Q:Q

 

[iamaelephant]

I'm half way through page 6 and OH MY FRIGGEN GOD this is boring. Is it worth continuing?

 

[AbAbber2k]

Originally posted by: chuckywang

Originally posted by: screw3d
Try this for scary <-- repost

It's graphic, and you've been warned!

That's not scary, that's just disgusting.

 

[NikPreviousAcct]

Originally posted by: iamaelephant
I'm half way through page 6 and OH MY FRIGGEN GOD this is boring. Is it worth continuing?

No. It's so damn old and so damn boring that it's a wonder it's still around.

 

[thesurge]

I want my *insert ridiculous amount of time* back.

 

[Don Vito Corleone]

Originally posted by: Nik

No. It's so damn old and so damn boring that it's a wonder it's still around.

Don't be so hard on yourself!

 

[LiquidImpulse]

fvck...that was the worst thing ever. I read through 30 minutes worth of my time, only to discover it's not scary at all.