Hello, here are my thoughts on her web site.
First and foremost, it's not yet ready to go live and be the online face of her business. The slow loading issue alone is losing her business. It should be addressed and properly tested before going live.
Regarding the design, the extensive use of color is competing with and detrimental to the presentation of the photography. I suggest ONE accent color and black-and-white for the rest of the interface. She should also stick to ONE typeface.
Don't dynamically resize the site and the images with the browser window.
Lose the reflections of the photos in the gallery. Also, when you click a particular image to enlarge it, it just sits on top of the rest of the interface, with word fragments and pieces of graphics sticking out of the edges of her photos. It looks messy.
It's unclear how to get back to the Portfolio menu. The Portfolio link in the lower right needs to be more obvious that it goes back to the Portfolio. The top Portfolio link should also take you back to the Portfolio menu.
Finally, she needs advice from photographers. There are other forums better suited to critique of her photography and its presentation online. Not to say that you shouldn't have posted here, just seek out the opinions of other photographers
One thing about offering work for free. If you put something on the sidewalk and label it free, it's junk. If you price it at $1, people will fight over it because it's now a "good deal." She should not offer her services for free. Anyone can do that. A professional believes in her work and assigns the appropriate value to it.
The bottom line is that the presentation draws attention to itself, and away from the photographs. Top photographers do this too, however their excellent work tends to own the page. By the way, protecting her feelings about her own work doesn't do her any good. If she's serious, she needs to face her critics. It's the only way she will improve.
I am a working photographer and I approve this message. Good luck to you both.
Jerome